Change: I had fallen asleep to Joe's laughter. Apparently he just loved this movie. I didn't, but of course that would mean nothing to Joe. I   View changes from previous version. (Word count: 4459)

Change: by surprise, that's for sure. I sat up in bed, all thoughts of my beautiful nightmare gone. Something had changed about me in the past   View changes from previous version. (Word count: 3981)

Change:  I sat completely still for a moment. "Like, seven hours," I said quietly. "But I mean... I'm sure it's fine." I took a deep breath.   View changes from previous version. (Word count: 3455)

Change: unconvinsed.unconvinced. Maybe I should just explain everything to her, I thought. She was my best friend, after all. Finally, Maya spoke up confidently. "Nick, you would not just make a stupid comment like that. What's up?" I smiled   View changes from previous version. (Word count: 2879)

Change: excitmentexcitement again. I just stood there outside the crowd, and I smiled. I actually felt tired after a performance, which was strange, since the last   View changes from previous version. (Word count: 2558)

Change: As usual, the first thing I saw after the show was Nicole Adams and Mallory Truscott standing in the wings beside the stage. I watched   View changes from previous version. (Word count: 2334)

Change: eyes and I heard Kevin playing the first few notes of our song "World War III..." "Tonight I walked into the bedroomYou were visibly upsetTellin' me I made a bad moveBut I didn't do nothin'You start screamin' wake the neighborsNow everybody's out for bloodDidn't   View changes from previous version. (Word count: 1795)

Change: that I'm nervous much... "Board games make me bored!" Sitting on this dumb bench in the middle of a public park with a complete stranger,   View changes from previous version. (Word count: 1418)

Change: well now. Looking up into the night sky, stars twinkled down at me. I stared at the spot where the sky disapeared to nothing. It   View changes from previous version. (Word count: 1080)

Change: as Mallory Truscott& my original character Miranda GraceSummary:Nicholas is mending a broken heart, and he begins to let everything get to him. He tries to break away   View changes from previous version. (Word count: 855)